An Unfinished Work

by | Nov 9, 2022 | Entertainment, Film | 129 comments

The short film titled ‘The Legend of Soggy Bog’ was never produced. However some test footage has been found!

The entire script for the short is below. The ideas behind this film are heavily inspired by The Creature From The Black Lagoon. As such, much of the characterization is based on that classic film. So to give your brain some reference here are some stills from the production of the Hollywood monster movie.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


The Legend of Soggy Bog

FADE IN:

EXT. WOODS—DAY

DALLAS BOYD, an overweight hick, is out in the woods hunting. As he stalks through the brush something catches his eye.

BOYD

What in tar nation?

Boyd peers between some branches to see the SOGGY BOG MONSTER moving Bigfoot like through the woods.

FADE TO BLACK

INT. Lawnjockey University of Advanced Science Lab—DAY

Freeze Frame of SOGGY BOG MONSTER seen through a microscope.

JACK

AMAZING!

JACK pulls the photograph out from under the microscope and hands it REDD

DR. REDD ALTAN, ELLEN ADARA and DR. JACK HANDY are standing in the lab with Dallas Boyd and ROBOT. The robot hands Jack a handkerchief, which he uses to clean his glasses, then hands back to the robot.

JACK

Thank you Robot, that will be all for now.

The Robot waddles back out the door.

JACK

(CONT’D)

Thank you for coming Mr. Boyd. I’m Dr. Jack Handy; I used to work at the old UFO research center on route 10, and these are my associates; Dr. Redd Altan and Ellen Adara.

REDD

This is a very intriguing case Mr. Boyd. If what you are saying is true it could mean that the Legend of Soggy Bog is real.

BOYD

Legend?

JACK

Ellen, could you get the book please?

ELLEN walks off to a shelf in the back of the room.

JACK(CONT’D)

What Redd is trying to say is, this discovery could be very important, and we simply must get our hands on it before those red commies do!

ELLEN returns with THE BOOK and hands it to JACK.

JACK (CONT’D)

Thank you. You see, according to this book there is a creature, identical to the one you described, of great power. Maybe even magic.

BOYD

You mean the bear-squid?

ELLEN

This bear-squid, as you say, is the Soggy Bog Monster. An ancient creature created by the Aztec Indians to protect their homeland.

REDD

It was only thought to be myth, until we heard your story.

JACK

Yes, we must go investigate this at once.

REDD

Do you think its safe Jack?

JACK

We have no choice! We have to do it for America. We can’t let the communists beat us to it!

A CU ON HIS EYES.

FADE TO BLACK.

EXT. WOODS—NIGHT

REDD, ELLEN, JACK and THE ROBOT are setting up a scientific camp in the woods.

JACK

Ok, this will be our base camp. My research shows that the creature should be somewhere within the designated search area.

REDD

How can we be sure?

JACK

Damnit REDD, you can’t argue with science!

ELLEN

Yes Redd, do not forget, Jack is the foremost scientist in the scientific study of advanced science.

JACK

I think Ellen is right. We need to stop bickering among ourselves. Redd, go check the perimeter parameters.

REDD walks away into the woods.

ELLEN

Jack, what do we do if we actually find this creature?

JACK

If we do it’ll be the biggest thing in science since the atom bomb. It will prove that all my theories are correct. It may even stop those Russian communists!

He stands very proud of himself.

ELLEN

Oh Jack, you are so smart about science.

JACK

Yes, I know.

FADE TO BLACK

EXT. WOODS—DAY

JACK and ELLEN emerge from the same tent as REDD rises from a sleeping spot on the ground. ROBOT stands guard.

JACK

Ellen, why don’t you cook us some breakfast?

ELLEN

It would be my honor.

REDD

Well, that was a quiet night.

JACK

Yes, a little too quiet.

REDD

What do you mean?

JACK

Didn’t you notice there were no natural sounds all night? Like the animals were afraid of something…In The Woods.

REDD

Yes, I see…

All of a sudden a bell or something begins to ring.

JACK

Hurry, that’s the perimeter alarm!

They all rush off into the woods.

EXT. WOODS-DAY

They all rush in and check some kind of sensor device.

JACK

Something definitely set the sensor off.

ELLEN

Yes, but what?

JACK

That I don’t know.

Just then The Soggy Bog Monster runs in and begins fighting with the robot. After a cheesy fight the monster wins and grabs ELLEN and runs off into the woods. REDD pulls out a gun and starts to aim.

JACK

No, you might hit ELLEN!

REDD

Damnit, it’s going to get away!

JACK

Maybe not!

JACK rushes over to the wrecked robot.

JACK

He’s definitely taken a lot of damage, but maybe, just maybe…Robot, can you understand me?

ROBOT

Yes.

JACK

ROBOT, do you know where the creature is going?

REDD

This is useless!

JACK

Just give it a chance man, IT’S SCIENCE!…Robot; do you know where the creature is going?

ROBOT

Yes.

REDD

Amazing!

JACK

Robot, where is it taking her?

ROBOT

To the Bog.

Then the robot collapses.

JACK

The bog, of course! Let’s go!

FADE TO BLACK

EXT. BOGG—DAY

The Soggy Bog Monster is offering ELLEN food of some sort (Ewok and Leia scene). REDD and Jack emerge from the woods.

JACK

ELLEN, are you alright?

ELLEN

Yes, he’s peaceful.

JACK

Well, let’s try to get you out of here.

REDD

Not so fast!

REDD pulls a gun on Jack.

JACK

What are you doing?

REDD

I need to take this creature back to my comrades in mother Russia. It is the way to our winning of the war!

JACK

My God! REDD, you’re a red commie!

REDD

Yes. Does this surprise you comrade? Mother Russia will wipe you American Pig Dogs off the planet with what we will learn from this creature.

JACK

No, it’s not a weapon man!

Just then the Soggy Bog Monster attacks REDD and after a hilarious fight kills him. ELLEN approaches Jack and he puts his arm around her.

JACK

I guess even dumb animals know communism is wrong.

JACK and ELLEN LAUGH as the monster disappears into the water.

FADE OUT.

About The Author

CPRM

CPRM

Organic troll farmer.

129 Comments

  1. The Hyperbole

    I was told there would be no reading.

    • MikeS

      Go slow. Sound out the words. We have faith in you!

      • Fourscore

        Yeah but did you see the size of some of those words? Like an eighth of an inch high, man.

  2. DEG

    f we do it’ll be the biggest thing in science since the atom bomb. It will prove that all my theories are correct. It may even stop those Russian communists!

    Sounds like he’s overpromising.

  3. MikeS

    JACK

    Damnit REDD, you can’t argue with science!

    ELLEN

    Yes Redd, do not forget, Jack is the foremost scientist in the scientific study of advanced science.

    Prescient.

    • Shiny Nerfherder

      Sciencey

    • Lackadaisical

      Yup, my second most favorite line, after the one about animals hating communism of course.

    • Fourscore

      There you go again, with the long words

      • MikeS

        “Jack” is the one that you got hung up on, isn’t it?

      • Fourscore

        I’m taking that very personal, MikeS

      • MikeS

        Thank goodness you lost all your weapons in that boating accident.

    • Not Adahn

      The next sentence makes it even better.

  4. Negroni Please

    So if the elections are all corrupt then how did Stacey Abrams lose? But if they’re not all corrupt, then… then… America is just fucking retarded? Goddamn it. I went long on tinfoil and lead. I should’ve gone long on cake.

    • DEG

      They’re not all corrupt.

      Some are corrupt.

      Mmm…. cake.

      • Fourscore

        Being ugly is not an asset.

    • MikeS

      America is just fucking retarded?

      Yes. I have no doubt there are some districts and precincts that heavily “fortify”, but the sad realization we all need to come to is that the vast majority of the voting public is uninformed and has been brainwashed into thinking they must pick a team and never, ever, forsake their team.

    • Not Adahn

      She can’t be governor of GA and President of Earth at the same time.

  5. Shiny Nerfherder

    “Tar Nation”

    Sounds like an asphalting road crew union.

  6. Shiny Nerfherder

    Just make sure those commies die horrible deaths.

    • R.J.

      Say “damn dirty commies” with a strong Southern accent.

      • R.J.

        Dayum derty caw-mees

  7. Lackadaisical

    Nice, I even enjoyed reading the script.

  8. MikeS

    Do they give Academy Awards for un-produced scripts? Because this should win one.

    • R.J.

      Agreed

    • DrOtto

      I haven’t heard that song in a minute (as the kids say). Funny thing is, I like it.

      • MikeS

        It slaps.

      • The Hyperbole

        I don’t think that you are using that word correctly.

      • MikeS

        If you’re referencing my usage of “slaps” for that particular song, I would agree.

        If that is a dig at Collective Soul, I’ll slap you.

    • Chafed

      I see arrows on the page!

      • rhywun

        Yeah, that was jarring.

  9. Fourscore

    I went to get popcorn and when I got back the credits were rolling. What’s up with that? I want my money back.

    • Gustave Lytton

      Went to get popcorn is code for falling asleep in the middle, right? Consider it stolen.

      • dbleagle

        In HS my date wanted to see “Grease”. I fell asleep at some point and woke up at the end of the movie with her gone.

      • Chafed

        Sounds like you got lucky.

      • MikeS

        Well played.

  10. Fourscore

    Great fight scene, CPRM, I watched it twice.

  11. Gustave Lytton

    Arrived at evening social just as it was closing up, hostess was kind enough to keep the taps on and pour a beer for each hand instead of the usual one at a time. Don’t care if it’s Coors Lite tonight. Soup and salad and football too.

      • MikeS

        I still have yet to try Old Forester. Thanks for the reminder. Will add to shopping list.

    • Chafed

      Wednesday night football?

      • MikeS

        Wednesday night foosball.

      • Gustave Lytton

        Don’t care. Wasn’t a great day at work.

  12. dbleagle

    Final results for the Hawaiian legislature: House 45D-5R, Senate 25D-0R
    For the US Senate: There were almost twice as many spoiled ballots as votes for the LP candidate. I should try and find the one other person who voted for her in my precinct.

    • Tundra

      Thank God the lifestyle trumps the politics.

    • MikeS

      For the virtual reverse of that, NoDak results:

      House 82R-12D
      Senate 43R-4D

    • slumbrew

      Sig

      All the Sig people love their Sigs.

      • Chafed

        Makes sense to me.

    • rhywun

      001100010010100001011110101101110011.

      • MikeS

        01010111 01101000 01100001 01110100 00100000 01100100 01101001 01100100 00100000 01111001 01101111 01110101 00100000 01110011 01100001 01111001 00100000 01110100 01101111 00100000 01101101 01100101 00111111

      • rhywun

        I can’t even.

      • MikeS

        /scans…jumps to chorus…listens for 4 seconds

        Good grief. That sucks even more than their radio songs.

      • Chafed

        Lol. Yes, but it’s on point.

    • EvilSheldon

      G43X MOS, if you’re willing to work on it a little. Bigger capacity if you run the Shield Arms magazines. Also, the G43 can accept a Striker Control Device, so it’s much safer to carry.

    • Winston

      Wait why do I have an avatar now?

      • MikeS

        How long has it been since you commented? Back awhile ago there was a great avatar reset and many people were given a random weird one like yours.

      • Winston

        Couple of months actually…

      • Fourscore

        Your Mom thought it would fit you

      • Winston

        OK. I thought it would have been weird to hack my account to just give me a avatar.

        And was the reset done by WordPress or this site specifically.

      • Chafed

        The avatar is a gift. You can’t give it back.

      • MikeS

        Some sort of WordPress bloodbath.

    • MikeS

      Huh. The flu is back.

      • Ownbestenemy

        And parents are so hammered with fear that what normally would be treated at home is being brought into clinics and ERs…

      • Winston

        Midterms are over…

    • Winston

      Dr. Kieran Moore said he would make a recommendation on masking in certain indoor settings if the backlog of delayed surgeries is affected by COVID-19, and would recommend reinstating mask mandates if there are further effects.

      And gee I wonder what caused that backlog?

  13. UnCivilServant

    You know what pisses me off? The lockdowns ended 24/7 business hours in places they didn’t kill outright. There’s nothing open.

    • MikeS

      You know what pisses me off?

      I’d get carpal tunnel typing out just the stuff I know.

    • MikeS

      Did the lockdowns do that? Or did whatever the hell is going on in the employment world do that? I mean, I know that the lockdowns were the genesis, but why does it still persist*?

      *general question for the universe, not aimed specifically at you

      • rhywun

        Fight for 15 (LOL that seems quaint), the Rent is too damn High, $7 for eggs, “sorry, your package is delayed”, and on and on… it seems all tied together.

        I.e. the system is broken.

      • MikeS

        Anecdotally; I work at a manufacturing company. Pre-COVID, we were starting assemblers (unskilled entry level) at $17, I think. And above average benefits. We are currently at $18.50 and competing with fast food joints who have suddenly gone to $18. This is in North Dakota. Fast food workers starting at $15/hr was a fucking pipe dream 4-ish years ago.

        That explains retail prices going up. What I don’t get is where are all the workers? Wages skyrocketed in a couple years, and yet nobody wants to work. The unemployment gravy train is over (at least here) so that’s not it. I just don’t get it. More married couples can now afford one spouse to stay home? I don’t know.

      • Gustave Lytton

        Same problem. We’re losing new people at the low end to fast food/similar and high end to deeper pocketed similar employers (not necessarily direct competitors either). Also seeing a number of end of career folks deciding to just pull the plug rather than sticking around another 5-10 years.

      • Winston

        Jeff Tucker predicted this would happen very early on. He was totally correct…

      • Chafed

        Good question. I think it is taking much longer than the “experts” thought for supply chains to normalize, the over expansion due to cheap money is still with us, and plenty of people still have unrealistic expectations about work.

      • MikeS

        I can’t speak directly to points 2 and 3, but I have first hand experience that point 1 is still playing hell with manufacturing and likely will for the foreseeable future (and is of course directly linked to point 3, and at least indirectly to point 2)

    • Not Adahn

      Yup. And while I can appreciate that it allowed my favorite diner to study their hours and conclude opening at 6:00 isn’t worth it… I’m hungry then.

    • MikeS

      He has a long, public history of cultural appropriation. If he doesn’t show up in drag, he’s an even bigger bitch than we think.

      Also; you’re Canadian?

      • Winston

        Yes and things are must worse here. Almost all politician supported lockdowns with the exceptions being mostky a couple of disgruntled Conservatives. Imagine if the only opposition in the US came from Rand Paul, Thomas Massie and some random Republican state legislators.

        Canadians do like gun bans and lockdowns and voted for internet censorship.

      • R C Dean

        “Imagine if the only opposition in the US came from Rand Paul, Thomas Massie and some random Republican state legislators.”

        Throw in a couple of governors, and I don’t really have to imagine it.

  14. MikeS

    After the musical abortion that Chafed linked above, how about some good music? Sage advice.

  15. Winston

    https://www.aier.org/article/the-revolutionary-trigger/

    The most stirring passage offers us to claim our rights to “Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness,” but those rights seem sadly alienable today. Complementary passages remind us of what we must do in the face of tyranny. Yet, the Tree of Liberty stands before us, molting and desiccated.

    One can no longer deny our system of government has become destructive of those proverbial ends. So doesn’t it need to be abolished? Maybe we have become accustomed to, inured to, this corrupted form.

    Acknowledging the dictates of prudence, I’m no more calling for the destruction of Chesterton’s fence than I am fomenting Jacobin behavior. It’s just that the Constitution has become a dead letter. Our government officials are corrupt. Federalism has been weakened. And our system is a negative-sum game run by profiteers and sociopaths.

    ….

    Of course, it didn’t take “F-15s” or “nuclear weapons” for the Taliban to get the world’s greatest fighting force out of Afghanistan. I don’t know many ordinary Americans with the courage of Pashtun cave dwellers, but I hope they’re out there.

    Like many who admire the Declaration of Independence, I’m one who resists violence. After all, other human beings are sacred because I accept that they have a right to life, liberty, and the rest. But like Buddhist warrior monks, we are not pacifists. If we are forced to defend ourselves, we will. Thus, there must be some clear threshold of mass self-defense.

    Interesting to see an AIER article essentially saying that the US government may have to be violently overthrown. This is scary but I can’t disagree really, especially after last night…

    But are they enough such people and are they willing to treated like dissidents in Red China?

    As the US government continues its efforts to sino-form America, across the Pacific, brave Chinese dissidents are showing the way, despite their terrible odds.

  16. Gender Traitor

    ***SIGH!!!*** It never fails. I just want to shut down my laptop and go to bed, and Windows decides it RILLY RILLY needs to update. 🙄

    • MikeS

      It’s just a checkbox to tell it to not force a restart.

      • MikeS

        Sorry, you said update. The workaround there is to tell it you’re on a metered connection. Then it lets you update when you want.

    • Gender Traitor

      Yay! It’s done! Good night! 🥱 😴

    • Chafed

      Brush and floss while it does its thing.

  17. Gustave Lytton

    Sumo begins Saturday night too!

    • MikeS

      +1 Fat Bastard

  18. Winston

    https://www.aier.org/article/when-lying-becomes-a-virtue-civilization-declines/

    Just as in China, the moral character of Americans is being degraded. As more and more of us remain silent, morality degrades, and the social order on which we all depend loses its capacity to facilitate human flourishing.

    Interesting how post-covid libertarians and classical liberals are sounding like socons. The AIER was never saying this sort of stuff until 2020. Note how Don Boudreaux, Jeff Tucker and Richard Ebeling longer speak of “modernity” anymore.

    Or how they just today published an article unironically saying that we need to Make Great America Again:

    https://www.aier.org/article/john-adams-on-liberty-americas-rationale-and-greatness/

    At a time when we often not only forget that liberty is both America’s rationale and its greatness, but routinely violate it, Americans would profit from returning to Adams’ wisdom.

    • creech

      “As more and more of us remain silent,”
      Many of us here admit we are guilty of this, as am I. We remain silent as proggie friends and acquaintances spew statist rhetoric. Yes, we don’t want to piss people off, but is our silence taken by onlookers as agreement? If we can’t or won’t defend individual liberty, then who will?

  19. MikeS

    Has anyone seen Brochettaward lately? The last I saw him he said he tested positive for the ‘vid. That was what…two…three weeks ago?

    • Plinker762

      Maybe he couldn’t handle being turned into a seconder.

    • Stinky Wizzleteats

      I was wondering about him myself. I hope he wasn’t the First! one around here to get a really bad case.

  20. Old Man With Candy

    Self indulgent note: I posted a pic of NPR Lady and me in Zoom last night, just to answer Tundra’s question of, “Why do you put up with that?”

    You weren’t there? Too bad.

    • Sean

      Conservative chicks are hotter. /wasn’t there

    • Grosspatzer

      Self indulgence abuse note: the lady doth have a pleasing countenance.

    • Rat on a train

      Go buy an EV.

  21. Gender Traitor

    Good morning RoaT, Sean, Old Man, and Stinky! Decided just last night to take today off, for the exciting reason that this is probably the last good day to clean the gutters before rain and cold and general meteorological disagreeability set in. Yippee. 😐

    • robodruid

      Good Morning GT, hope it goes well.
      Enjoy the nice weather.

      • Gender Traitor

        Good morning, ‘bodru, and thanks! Have you all had any much-needed rain lately? Or is it too late to do much good?

    • Rat on a train

      Warm and dry today then a couple days of warm and wet then cold. Yep, last good day for outdoor work.

  22. Grosspatzer

    Mornin’, reprobates!

    That movie needs to be made. Starring STEVE SMITH as the Soggy Big Monster, and Anthony Fauci as Jack, the foremost scientist in the scientific study of advanced science.

    • Gender Traitor

      Good morning, ‘patzie! Sleeping nice and toasty warm now?

      • Grosspatzer

        Mornin’, GT! Toasty indeed. Thick fog outside to match my mental state. Long weekend, here we come!

    • R.J.

      Morning.

      • Grosspatzer

        Yo. Tall Covfefe! And a fine smoke.

      • R.J.

        Yes indeed! Working early so I can leave early.

  23. Cowboy

    Morning yall. Cowpoke woke up at 5am again. Sure cant wait for him to normalize to the new time clock thing. Otherwise momma is going to be grumpy forever. I usually go to the gym MWF, and sleep in the extra 2 hours on the rest days. So yeah, the extra sleep would be nice for all of us. Wpund up going to bed at 9 last night just to get my 8 hours

    • Gender Traitor

      Yippee ki yay, Cowboy!

    • Grosspatzer

      “Cowpoke woke up at 5am again.”

      Ah, memories. My oldest demanded to be fed every four hours until he was about 3 months old, you could set the clock by his schedule. Thursdays were my nights to provide the feedings. I identified as a zombie for a while.

  24. UnCivilServant

    I really have to fix my sleep schedule. I was wide awake at too darn early, then I got to sleep only to wake up late. 🙁

    • UnCivilServant

      If it wasn’t a remote day and they hadn’t held me 2 hours past end of workday yesterday, I’d be in trouble.

      • Gender Traitor

        By my calculations, they still owe you an hour.